ok heres the next part not finished yet and im trying out the "formal way" of typing a story.

Kira was calmly jogging after the bus that Eiji had gotten on. She was thinking why had she bothered to save Eiji from Ayama. She wanted to believe that she did it so Ayama didn't succeed but that wasn't it... suddenly an explosion broke her away from her thoughts, she looked ahead, about two blocks, and saw the back of the bus blown out and inside was Dementio. Suddenly a powerful strike of fear overcame Kira which completely paralyzed her, she ignored all of the people running away and stood there just staring at the clown that was two blocks away. Another explosion went off and she snapped out of it. She looked around to see if she could find Eiji, she saw him run around the corner of the street ahead and went after him. As she turned the corner she saw Eiji sitting on the side walk and Ayama laying on the ground unconscious, "Eiji!" she runs up to him, "What happened?" Eiji looks up at her. "I ran into her and I guess I knocked her out..." From behind them they could hear other explosions going off as Dementio continued his massacre. "We have to get out of here now before he spots us!" said Kira while grabbing Eiji's arm and picking him up, Eiji looked down at Ayama, "what about her? we cant just leave her here" Kira quickly bent down and picked up Ayama like she was nothing, "come on lets go!" The two ran from the area and at the same time a group of police cruisers passed by with their sirens wailing and flashing lights, they stopped in front of Dementio got out of their cars and, while hiding behind their bullet proof doors, began to yell orders at the psychotic clown. (WIP)

hope you like how its going XD and soad thanks for readin my stories hope someone else reads them too,